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kenichi
Wise King of the Right  Usergroup: Sponsors Joined: Jun 09, 2004 Location: Marlton, NJ Total Topics: 40 Total Posts: 1513 |
 #191
Here's some art. http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/in...D=29354878&albumId=2181123 And we are here as on a darkling plain Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight, Where ignorant armies clash by night |
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Michael T
Graduate  Usergroup: Members Joined: Oct 02, 2008 Location: Plymouth, UK. Total Topics: 9 Total Posts: 126 |
#192
ThegreatEpicurus wrote: Luka’s Republic It's a nice little story 'ThegreatEpicurus' but needs a little work. For the narrator to be believeable you need to remember not to use modern speach or terms like 'tear gas'. Also there is no mention of Beartrice prior to when the narrator congratulates the reader for guessing that it is her the king married, except one mention in the previous sentence. She needs to be introduced in some form earlier in the story, perhaps in some mysterious form, so as not to give the game away. You need to check it through for grammer/spelling (knew not new) etc. 
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ThegreatEpicurus
Aspirant  Usergroup: Members Joined: Apr 13, 2009 Total Topics: 6 Total Posts: 32 |
#193
The Narrator is history, therefore he can use any language he wants. I would love to introduce Beatrice earlier, well yeh I agree but only got 2,500 worlds to play with. Spelling you are right, but I have dyslexia so struggle with that. Thanks for reading 
Love is not fast,its slow. Its not first sight, its first connection. Love is not fate, love is freedom. Love never runs, it walks beside you. Love is comfort, love is debate. Love is found in your eyes, always in your eyes. |
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OlyaD
Professor  Usergroup: Members Joined: Dec 13, 2003 Total Topics: 79 Total Posts: 687 |
#194
Tobias wrote: Yes, I did actually read it, but I don't think the inspiration comes from that. It is more likea 'phenomenological' exploration of the themes I've writen my master theses on. I really liked "Window". It probably took going to some "dark places" to write, no? Let the lover be disgraceful, crazy, absentminded. Someone sober will worry about things going badly. Let the lover be. - Rumi |
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Tobias
Metaphysical exorcist  Usergroup: Moderators Joined: Feb 17, 2003 Location: Just rub the mirror Total Topics: 62 Total Posts: 6068 |
#195
It probably took going to some "dark places" to write, no? Well ... ehh, ... The story isn't exactly cute no, but although all characters are made up, the details, tactics etc. are what I found during my research in the subject of stalking. So I didn't have to go to dark places myself, they are reasonably well documented. I just knit them together. Hope that doesn't disappoint too much  Ahh, but it is true, describing the main character did take some dark turns of empathy, yes.
"The Power of Kant compels you" "The Power of Kant compels you" "The Power of Kant compels you" |
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Bobard
remodernist  Usergroup: Moderators Joined: May 04, 2008 Total Topics: 18 Total Posts: 214 |
#196
Here's a selection of what I have been working on lately all acrylic on heavy paper except man_in_head which is oil on board. Attached Files:
never argue with an idiot or a drunk |
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kkiiji
Aubrey de Grey: a vampire  Usergroup: Sponsors Joined: Sep 30, 2007 Location: San Diego, California Total Topics: 56 Total Posts: 1583 |
#197
What's with the creepy styled portraits and naked people? What's this style of art called? It's freaking me out. Heard joke once: Man goes to doctor. Says he's depressed. Says life seems harsh and cruel. Says he feels all alone in a threatening world where what lies ahead is vague and uncertain. Doctor says "Treatment is simple. Great clown Pagliacci is in town tonight. Go and see him. That should pick you up." Man bursts into tears. Says "But Doctor... I am Pagliacci." Good joke, everybody laugh. Roll on snare drum... Curtains. |
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Bobard
remodernist Usergroup: Moderators Joined: May 04, 2008 Total Topics: 18 Total Posts: 214 |
#198
Subject: Who me?? kkiiji wrote: What's with the creepy styled portraits and naked people? What's this style of art called? It's freaking me out. Well ignore the trees - I just painted them as exercises to show my mum rather than mother.jpg as for the rest of them I am starting to think I might be a stuckist.http://www.stuckism.com/ Edited by Bobard on Apr 21, 2009 - 1:22 PM never argue with an idiot or a drunk |
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SIR2U
The Wonderor of Why  Usergroup: Sponsors Joined: Nov 17, 2006 Location: Honduras Total Topics: 21 Total Posts: 1968 |
#199
Are stuckist artists called that because they are stuck at a childish level of painting? I'm sorry if that seems offensive but a lot of the stuff looks like it. Unknown Alanic wiseman. "Ignorance and bad teeth have at least one thing in common. Keeping your mouth closed makes them both less obvious" A Zulu medicine man does not ask his patients when they first had symptoms. He asks them when they stopped singing. - Anonymous Man cannot survive except by gaining knowledge, and reason is his only means to gain it. Reason is the faculty that perceives, identifies and integrates the material provided by his senses. |
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Bobard
remodernist Usergroup: Moderators Joined: May 04, 2008 Total Topics: 18 Total Posts: 214 |
#200
You're not the first to level that accusation at them; perhaps they have nowhere to go as a consequence of wanting to be objective, figurative painters which have rejected realism. However it is not for me to defend other artists work but I would be happy to explore the ideals of stuckism if you create a thread in philosophy of art section. I really don’t want to derail this thread. never argue with an idiot or a drunk |
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